First Ork

you need to take a step back so that you have the focus on the mini, as you can see it is focused on the background items. Hence him being blurry.

Check out the tutorial section for a photography tutorial, some of the things in there will help you. Also a cleaner background like in say Marc's pics with help us pay more attention to the model.

Other than that, he looks a little overly glossed imo, but it will take better pics to be able to comment more.

I'll comment once you get a clearer pic up.

Better yet CJ, bring him with you on Wednesday.

wednesday?

CJ has an outstanding financial commitment

Not sure if he is staying for a game or not.

The move to level 4 is complete save for the world of totes which still roams down there, so I'm open for hosting games again.

CJ, the camera works fine, you can tell from the photo that it can focus fine... you are just focusing on the background and not the model itself.

The camera is fine CJ.

can I break the camera then?

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Ahhh, much better

Ink dem teef !

patience* CJ



Seems like you need to take more care and time when undercoating. There are a lot of spaces where the bare plastic shows through.

The skin also needs some high-lighting, and shading work. Don't know what paints you are using but it still looks a little glossy on the top two. The leather on the top guy's boots are also very glossy. Don't know much leather that is that glossy.

Also, mold lines are covering most of the models. I'd shave them off for sure.

A smaller brush would be good for the eyes.

I think the scheme could work, but right now you need to take more time on everything. If you want I could spend an hour some time and work with you on something.

The positioning isn't too bad, although the last model seems a little off for me... I know what you are going for but I don't think the feet as they are work too well.

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Aye, bring the drinks Wednesday as well

so you put it up here for use to just go...

"keep going CJ, then make the effort of post more pics and we will comment on those."

If you didn't want criticism, then why post them?

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god? hah, learn to take some criticism man. If you wanted us to just look and say nothing then say so next time.

I was trying to help you out.

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I let you know what needed work, it's called criticism. It's one way that human beings learn.

not the only way...

Where's the RESET button on this thing?

Might want to work on your personal human tatics cuz they aren't very good.

I'm done...

I know about 100 people that would disagree with you, but then again they wouldn't post WIP shots and expect compliments and no criticism.

Ryan: notice I said ONE way.

So would everyone rather that anything posted just gets "looks awesome man, cant wait to see more" and "wow that is cool!" as responses?

you shot it down and now I'm not in the mood. So I quit

fair enough, I thought you said it was a WIP?

I offered some thoughts on what there was to fix.

no...you didn't offer thoughts...you shot it down. Now I can see if it was a finished model but they weren't. I think your just upset due to the fact I won't make them green. I'm going to Mob you. Your going down either way....